Authentic sales - is it possible?

This is the first 'sales' page I wrote after the "Raw Truth" ezine and blog post that caused a stir on Twitter.

I had a ball! I actually did not want to finish writing it (ok - almost did not want to stop writing!)

I just let my voice pour out and connect, in a totally me kind of way.

I love the product, and I love the description page more!

Take a look and let me know what you think:

http://innercompass.com.au/content/view/358

And no, I am not pressuring you to buy anything, just to comment on the style or anything else that takes your fancy!

~ Zoe